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Analogous Sunset

Above Open Fields,
Contrails Scratch The Colored Sky;
Mountains And Trees Sleep.

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  1. Date: 5/10/2009 1:59:00 AM

    Tyler, Congratulations on the feature of this remarkable haiku...Raul

  1. Date: 5/6/2009 3:49:00 PM

    Dear Tyler,Congratulations on YOUR Featured POEM "Analogous Sunset"I see why YOU like Haiku so much, because YOU do such a Superb Job of writing them Thank-YOU for YOUR Gracious Comments ALWAYS...HG

  1. Date: 5/6/2009 7:17:00 AM

    Very lovely Haiku! Congratulations on your featured poem! Laura :)

  1. Date: 5/5/2009 9:38:00 PM

    Nice Haiku. Congratulations on having it featured this week. Well done. Smiles from Lolita

  1. Date: 5/4/2009 10:37:00 AM

    Congratulations on having your haiku featured this week. Love, Dane

  1. Date: 5/4/2009 9:06:00 AM

    Congrat Tyler on your haiku being featured. Vince

  1. Date: 5/4/2009 7:41:00 AM

    Awesome haiku. Warmest congrats on an excellent featured write. Love, Shar

  1. Date: 5/4/2009 4:09:00 AM

    Wonderful writing, Congratulations on being featured, kindest thoughts, Anna-Marie.

  1. Date: 5/3/2009 10:19:00 PM

    Amaking Haiku poem. Congratulations on your featured piece of art. Mine is also featured. Ernilando

  1. Date: 5/3/2009 7:43:00 PM

    Great haiku, Tyler! Congrats on being featured! Ruben.

  1. Date: 5/3/2009 6:42:00 PM

    Nice use of imagery to convey your thought in just three lines. Congratulations on having your haiku featured. Keep on writing. Enjoy your honor. Karen

  1. Date: 5/3/2009 6:02:00 PM

    Lovely work! Congratulations on being featured this week! Carrie

  1. Date: 2/19/2009 2:00:00 PM

    this is a great write i love reading and writing haiku poetry ........thank for your continued comments!

  1. Date: 2/17/2009 2:05:00 PM

    Tyler, thanks for your comment on my poems. Please write more so I can read more of your work!

  1. Date: 2/14/2009 7:32:00 PM

    Tyler, the irony of contrails soaring over peaceful nature is amazing. I look forward to reading more of your work! Carolyn

  1. Date: 1/28/2009 4:09:00 PM

    Nice haiku, Tyler. I liked your description, "Contrails scratch the Colored Sky". Donna G.

  1. Date: 1/28/2009 3:59:00 AM

    This is beautiful, Tyler. A piece of paradise in this write. Your images are great. Thank you for sharing and your thoughtful comment. Welcome to the Soup! Love, Robin

  1. Date: 1/28/2009 3:49:00 AM

    Beautiful haiku. :) check your soup mail. :) Kristin

  1. Date: 1/26/2009 3:58:00 PM

    NICE POEM TYLER THAT WAS REALLY GOOD...................................DANIELLE

  1. Date: 1/18/2009 1:23:00 AM

    Beautiful Haiku, dear Tyler. I await more. Love and peace, Lainie

  1. Date: 1/16/2009 9:45:00 AM

    Thank you for commenting on my poem..you have a talent for this form.. this is lovely..glad you are with us. BG

  1. Date: 1/16/2009 9:41:00 AM

    Great job again on this piece. You paint such wonderful pictures with such few words. Welcome to the soup.

  1. Date: 1/16/2009 9:37:00 AM

    love those contrails! that's the white exhaust from a jet aye? Glad you liked my Haiku, I was trying to use similiar sounds. You said it was a mono....? I was actually kinda goofy on the concet of so few words doing much of anything. Needless to say I need to explore the potential more LOL. Light & LOve Debbie Guzzi

  1. Date: 1/16/2009 9:10:00 AM

    wow.. great poem :) Love always, Serenity

  1. Date: 1/15/2009 7:49:00 PM

    Thanks for your comments. Good luck on your writing...Raul

  1. Date: 1/15/2009 4:23:00 PM

    GOOD POEM THAT IS REALLY GOOD TYLER.....................DANIELLE

  1. Date: 1/15/2009 1:25:00 PM

    Beautiful word painting. You have a lovely gift, thanks for sharing it with us and wlcome to POETRYSOUP. Elizabeth

  1. Date: 1/15/2009 12:32:00 AM

    Nice haiku Tyler, I like to watch contrails dissipate from the sky. ~Caramel

  1. Date: 1/14/2009 4:49:00 PM

    You are a great poet bringing in beautiful painting painted by words. DN

  1. Date: 1/12/2009 3:37:00 PM

    Nice painting of words.

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