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SURPRISE!

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SURPRISE!

Cute
Kitten
Beside mom
On our front porch
Cries

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  1. Date: 6/30/2010 8:46:00 PM
    Aw and I came right to another cute kitty poem!! nice seeing you here tonight! Luv, Andrea

  1. Date: 1/30/2009 5:16:00 PM
    Awwwww. That's a nice surprise. I love cats - Unfortunately, I'm tremendously allergic (though when I was young I had a cat, and suffered no ill effects at all - now, forget it!) Don't you read your Soup Mail, mister? Or is there a reason you don't use it - say, from prying eyes - and what the devil (can I say that?) is "occultism"???!!! Is this a Christian site? Do tell. And thank you so very much for all your comments and enthusiasm for my work. I am a admirer of your work as well.

  1. Date: 1/11/2009 9:45:00 AM
    If I lived nearby I might be very tempted. However, I have a feeling someone might be unwilling to part with sweet kitty at this point. Good luck and just enjoy! They are too precious! Love, Shar

  1. Date: 1/10/2009 2:39:00 PM
    So you like cats huh? love this poem and how you put mom in which the kitten. short powerful poetry. enjoyed reading it.

  1. Date: 1/10/2009 3:38:00 AM
    :( Daver, if I lived near you, I'd take that sweet baby kitty-cat. :( Poor baby, you are so kind. love, Kristin

  1. Date: 1/9/2009 4:35:00 PM
    Cute poem! Enjoyed it. Karen

  1. Date: 1/9/2009 4:09:00 PM
    I think you have a new family member. Awww, sweet. Love, Shar

  1. Date: 1/9/2009 5:40:00 AM
    O, this is priceless. There is nothing cuter than babies, kittens, puppies, kids. I love this! Poor little kittie! Love Christie

  1. Date: 1/9/2009 5:40:00 AM
    The form is perfect while the imagery is so clear and details the action of the kitten well. Very well written. Michael