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Dreams of Happiness

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Dreams of Happiness

On the sea of joy
I sail my boat of sorrow
with my oars of pain

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  1. Date: 5/6/2009 3:29:00 PM

    Love it! This is awesome I'm new to haiku and senryu lol did I spell it right thanks for your warm comments Daniel. - yours truly jeremiah

  1. Date: 1/17/2009 11:29:00 PM

    Awesome senryu Daniel, It spoke volumes. Great job! I liked it. ~Caramel

  1. Date: 1/7/2009 9:09:00 PM

    Great senryu, Daniel. the imagery is great and the sentiment, heartfelt. Awesome job! Love, Robin

  1. Date: 1/7/2009 5:03:00 PM

    Great words you've penned today Daniel. I like the depth of this thought. Good job...Raul

  1. Date: 1/7/2009 1:55:00 PM

    Nice usage of words here . . . The senryu has never been written better . . .