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A Hum

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A Hum

HMMM HMMMM HMMMMM
HMMM HMMMM HMMMMM
I can hear a hum
HMMM HMMMM HMMMMM
It is getting closer
HMMM HMMMM HMMMMM
It became my heart beat

A union of voices emerged from somewhere near
Drums slowly began to play
HMMM HMMMM HMMMMM
The hum once more

I close my eyes to seek 
I close my eyes to identify the hum, voices, and drums
I close my eyes and seek

Tears dropped from my eyes;
A prayer was sent...

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  1. Date: 1/9/2009 12:19:00 PM
    A hum sounds more like a beacon or a way of letting some one know who you are. thank you for your comments and have a great day, youve got mail!!!

  1. Date: 1/7/2009 8:47:00 PM
    Ill pray to that, hows school and how was your new years? been putting some silly stuff on here fo a little whie until next week, enjoyed reading this, have a good day.