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May I Have This Dance?

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May I Have This Dance?

We looked at eachother
Taking each step one at a time
May I have this dance
Take my hand
And pull me close

I remember the lights on us
In the center of the dance floor
You took off your mask
And revealed the person within
I lifted my hand 
And removed my mask

There was a gasp
And you leaned down
I reached up
And our lips locked
That was the begining
Of our lives together

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  1. Date: 5/9/2009 11:07:00 PM
    loved this one, great story, great images. as always you amaze us! much love! madison

  1. Date: 5/7/2009 2:05:00 PM
    Alexz, this is an amazing and wonderful love story. Congratulations. I have a featured poem this week. Ernilando

  1. Date: 3/19/2009 5:07:00 PM
    Great poem! I really enjoyed this. Amazing!!! Cool, Rockin' poem!

  1. Date: 2/27/2009 12:25:00 AM
    Alexz, this poem reminded me of "Romeo & Juliet," meeting on a dance floor wearing masks. It sounds like you met your one true love. Congratulations! Great work. Carolyn

  1. Date: 1/25/2009 8:00:00 PM
    Lovely, Alexz. Your poem reminded me of my senior prom...thank God I was popular in High School...and not considered the school's dork-ass moron LOL!. Each verse in this poem is real, down-to-earth and honest. Your poetry is quite exceptional when you keep it tight and simple. I'm hosting a new Member contest - I think you should enter it - this poem warrants attention! Peace always, John

  1. Date: 1/13/2009 8:30:00 AM
    wow...I've had a dance experience b4 too... it's amazing!

  1. Date: 1/7/2009 7:12:00 PM
    whats up, you like cookies? new poem and come show some love.

  1. Date: 1/7/2009 10:17:00 AM
    ummm, hey youre freaking me out, so, quit talking to me k?

  1. Date: 1/6/2009 5:46:00 PM
    so whats up why are there no more folks in the chat room. are you guys upset at each other?

  1. Date: 1/6/2009 2:35:00 PM
    this is nice. john

  1. Date: 1/6/2009 7:29:00 AM
    GREAT JOB alex, this reads like a great story and like i said poets get better with the years and not the months. Enjoyed reading it and have a good day.

  1. Date: 1/5/2009 6:08:00 PM
    Wowsers its HAPPY! lol. Laurie

  1. Date: 1/5/2009 2:38:00 PM
    awww...that's so sweet..i like this one *Breana

  1. Date: 1/5/2009 1:32:00 PM
    cute one Alexz ....Maryam

  1. Date: 1/5/2009 10:39:00 AM
    Enjoy the magic....always, Christy