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Offering

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Offering

I'd offer you a hand,
but every time you say
"Don't bother."
I'd offer you a hand,
But I just get dirty looks.
What would you do,
If I were to offer a foot?

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  1. Date: 9/29/2009 7:48:00 PM

    Sarah, kudos on this selected poem going through the finals! Ruben.

  1. Date: 9/29/2009 11:51:00 AM

    Sarah, congratulations on making the first round of the contest...Raul

  1. Date: 9/24/2009 10:09:00 AM

    Congratulations on your poem making it through the first round.Wishing you the best in the finals. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 1/22/2009 2:17:00 PM

    What a lovely poem!!! Cleverly put! Congratulations!

  1. Date: 1/22/2009 1:55:00 PM

    LOL, Congratulations on your poem being featured this week, made me laugh at the end, Good one..God Bless*Tyesha

  1. Date: 1/22/2009 10:09:00 AM

    Congratulations sarah, on "Offering" being featured. Vince

  1. Date: 1/22/2009 9:08:00 AM

    Sarah - I just wanted to say congratulations on having your poetry featured this week – God Bless, MJ

  1. Date: 1/21/2009 2:07:00 PM

    Had to chuckle at the last line. Congratulations on having your poem featured this week. Best wishes with your writing. Karen

  1. Date: 1/19/2009 3:25:00 PM

    A foot, indeed! Well written, Sarah. Congratulations for being featured this week. Donna G.

  1. Date: 1/19/2009 3:25:00 PM

    I get a kick out of your stuff, Sarah. Good humor....good vengeance....good ridance. Congrats on this selection. Love, daver

  1. Date: 1/19/2009 11:00:00 AM

    Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week. May you have many more. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 1/19/2009 9:14:00 AM

    Congrats on your featured write! Love, Shar

  1. Date: 1/4/2009 4:51:00 PM

    people are just sometimes to proud to accept help from others and that is me sometimes. great and real poetry, enjoyed reading it. Dont laugh at my poem BABYS.... [SMILE]