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word morph – COLD to WARM

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word morph – COLD to WARM

until our worlds collided my body was COLD
my life before you was bound in black CORD
like the colour of my cave and the mood of my WORD
now, your love brings me light, your soul is my WARD
your breath gives me strength, and your heart keeps me WARM



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  1. Date: 1/6/2009 6:12:00 AM
    HOW INTERESTING! EXCELLENT AND THANKS FOR YOUR COMMENTS, NIGEL!!

  1. Date: 1/5/2009 11:33:00 AM
    you may have a new form of poetry. all it needs is a name; and i can see soupers giving it a try. john

  1. Date: 1/5/2009 7:59:00 AM
    This is an intriguing form, short and revealing. Thanks for your congrats. Love, daver

  1. Date: 1/4/2009 9:16:00 PM
    This is great, Nigel. I agree with Sharon. Awesome job. The challenge was different (and fun). Can't wait to see everyones, as they post! This should be interesting! GBY. Love, Robin

  1. Date: 1/4/2009 2:04:00 PM
    Nice flow of words that flowed very well as i read. thought they were the same word at, this is unique. Thank you again for the great comment on my poem, BABYS....

  1. Date: 1/4/2009 8:26:00 AM
    Like it has been said before...thank you for another challenge. It will not be an easy one, but my fellow soupers always astound me with their creative juices....your poem here is an example of that! ~ Love, Carrie

  1. Date: 1/4/2009 7:23:00 AM
    Nigel, how did you write such a beautiful poem sticking to this challenge??? I have never done anything like this before. It is indeed unique and no doubt will be very difficult. Thanks for stretching our brains (if I am even able!). Love, Shar

  1. Date: 1/4/2009 6:22:00 AM
    Nigel - I will certainly do that - Exactly the case between my wife and I - great sentiments within this poem - God Bless, MJ

  1. Date: 1/4/2009 4:20:00 AM
    Hi Kristin, and sorry for confusing you. Yes, you write it like this one. Hope you enjoy the challenge!

  1. Date: 1/4/2009 4:13:00 AM
    I must admit, that I am confused! lol excuse my thickness, but, when writing the form, do you just use the four letter words, or write a poem with the words at the end of each line, like this one? Help! Thanks, Nigel! This looks like quite the challenge! Kristin

  1. Date: 1/4/2009 4:07:00 AM
    This is going to be a difficult form. Hope it challenges people, and they have fun with it. Yours is of course wonderful. I think it would be a winner in our contest! LOL Love tink

  1. Date: 1/4/2009 3:10:00 AM
    Great poem Nigel, the depth of love is an abyss. I too have many loves but writing is one of my greatest. Best of luck in 2009...Raul