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sequence-PASSING SEASONS

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sequence-PASSING SEASONS

Spring
watches
a flower-
August a moon-
as
Fall
dresses
scarlet red-
winter silent
calls

Note seen with Japanese haiku eyes

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  1. Date: 1/5/2009 5:15:00 PM
    Brian this one is really exceptional. Very nice very clever. Liked it alot. GBU Michael

  1. Date: 1/4/2009 7:18:00 AM
    Amazing. Going through the seasons with such poetic talent. Truly brilliant. Love, Shar

  1. Date: 1/4/2009 4:10:00 AM
    I just love this one! Amazing imagery..."fall dresses scarlet red" great one! This is also a hard form...never tried it and you write them so well. Love Christie

  1. Date: 1/4/2009 4:09:00 AM
    Amazing! Wow, this is so gentle and birlliant, and is going into my favorites. what a beauty here, Brian! Love, Kristin

  1. Date: 1/4/2009 1:42:00 AM
    Grat work Brian, the seasons are beautifully felt...Raul