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Existing

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Existing

I wish I wasnt here to hear your voice
It shouts through my brain
That sometimes I wanna go insane
I dont like it when you put me down
Or when you always make me cry
I'm through with you
I dont your s**t anymore

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  1. Date: 2/24/2009 4:03:00 PM
    Kick his [...], Alexz! You make me feel the moment, see the action. Great poem. keep on writing. Ruben.

  1. Date: 1/31/2009 8:56:00 PM
    Alexz, you write very well. You are honest and sincere with your feelings. With the exception of your last line of this poem...I think you are genuinely talented. I would really look forward to you writing a poem for my new Member contest..."My First Kiss'. You have a supressed talent, Alexz. Open it up and and make it shine. Peace always, John

  1. Date: 1/13/2009 8:32:00 AM
    Great! :)

  1. Date: 1/5/2009 9:35:00 AM
    Sheesh! ...give him the boot! ...PLEASE!! Don't let anybody get in the way of you being YOU! Best wishes, Keith

  1. Date: 1/4/2009 3:13:00 PM
    What are you up to.?, me, about to eat. cant wait....

  1. Date: 1/4/2009 1:36:00 PM
    hey rebel, you've got mail

  1. Date: 1/3/2009 4:09:00 PM
    great way of releasing some tensions and really getting down to real pain relief by way of poetry. enjoyed reading it.