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I am sittin here trying to remembering the happy
Finally I can 
I remember when I use to be happy
How everthing changed
Some of the bad rushes back to me
A tear slips
Here's the pain
But 
Then I talk to you 
And I am happy again 
Smile comes across my face
Can't believe someone actully 
Wants to be my friend.....

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  1. Date: 12/31/2008 2:01:00 PM
    We're all your friends here at the soup Breana! Full of emotion and significant language... BRAVO my dear!! Best wishes, Keith

  1. Date: 12/31/2008 1:31:00 PM
    Breana - Awh - I'm certain you will find many friendly people on this site - What a touching poem - Emotions beautifully expressed - Best wishes for the coming year - God Bless, MJ

  1. Date: 12/31/2008 9:24:00 AM
    What a wonderful, bittersweet poem, Breana! You express yourself with heartbreaking vulnerability; it compells without being tedious. Phenomenal work! Warm regards, John.

  1. Date: 12/31/2008 7:40:00 AM
    GRT.

  1. Date: 12/31/2008 6:18:00 AM
    This is one of the sweetest poems I have read in a long time. :) There is a writer that once wrote: a little girl was late getting home, her mother asked where she had been...the girl says "finding tears" - "finding tears" her mother asked? yes my friend lost hers so I gave her some of mine" Blessings to you in the New Year:)

  1. Date: 12/30/2008 11:52:00 PM
    very nice touch, i am sure we have all felt that way before. then it makes you think what happened next, i like that.

  1. Date: 12/30/2008 11:35:00 PM
    love the skillful way you changed the mood of the poem.