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My New Pen

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My New Pen

I got a great gift this year
I brand new pen - it looks ever so dear.
It's got a fine tip
and a solid sliver clip,
it came in an exquisite red box
much better than last year's socks.

It's writes in a classy black
and it's initialed on the back,
it's got a fancy swivel motion
it's full of writer's block potion!
Oh, a brand new pen, what a delight!
If only I could think of something to write!

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  1. Date: 11/27/2009 2:07:00 AM

    flowing with inspiratio'

  1. Date: 8/5/2009 8:34:00 AM

    good job, nice write Jonathan. Diogenes

  1. Date: 12/31/2008 2:08:00 AM

    Hey! That was a very good poem considering the subject was as trivial as a new pen! LOL..good job! Last line made a me laugh out loud! :) ~Aakanksha

  1. Date: 12/30/2008 3:56:00 PM

    Jonathan great poem. You did think of something to write lol. I can relate to the block potion. GBU Michael

  1. Date: 12/30/2008 7:38:00 AM

    I hear you...I've been blocked for several weeks now..maybe I need a new pen! Good luck and I enjoyed your poem. BG

  1. Date: 12/30/2008 7:33:00 AM

    lol....nice poem...the last line made me laugh :)...congrats on your new pen, i'm sure you'll be having new ideas soon....tc...Sara...