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Steve Edmonds
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Majestic Mountain
Snowy white mountains, Whispery clouds at the peak; Parted by the sun.
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Abe Lopez
Date: 1/12/2009 3:25:00 PM
Nice haiku, the imagery is excellent.
Daniel Neal
Date: 12/30/2008 2:57:00 AM
But we'll see, when I sit down to look at my inspiration. I am going to work hard, to try and get one to the quality you are at. Later-DN
Daniel Neal
Date: 12/30/2008 2:56:00 AM
Wow you have mastered this form quite well. You really put my work to shame. I look at mine and I think I have to write more and when I read your work, I think I can't beat him.
Michael Jordan
Date: 12/29/2008 3:04:00 PM
Steve what a wonderful Haiku you have penned - May the new year bring you and those you love many blessings - MJ
Laura Mckenzie
Date: 12/28/2008 7:55:00 PM
Lovely Haiku Laura :) Happy New Year!
christopher higgins
Date: 12/28/2008 9:42:00 AM
This is so beautifully written. I am in love with this Haiku. You have done a masterful job. Great!
Sara Zahed
Date: 12/28/2008 7:01:00 AM
BeAtIfUl!! I liked the "Whispery clouds" part, yet in all, a lovely poem...tc...Sara...
Elizabeth Neal
Date: 12/28/2008 3:39:00 AM
Something about white mountain caps that is peaceful. You amaze me with your words.
Helen J Radford
Date: 12/28/2008 3:26:00 AM
Love the simplicity. Bravo!
Raul Moreno
Date: 12/28/2008 2:28:00 AM
Nice haiku Caramel, you are quite the visionary. I have similar thoughts of mountian peace...Raul
