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farah chamma
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Clear Waters
The blue waters shine Reflecting the distant sky Seagulls swim, I smile
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shirin neshat
Date: 4/30/2009 1:32:00 AM
good one.
Adeleke Adeite
Date: 4/11/2009 7:44:00 AM
great poem, awesome poet. this piece is great keeep writing friend. "LONG TIME".. love Leke
Date: 3/17/2009 3:59:00 PM
I'm smiling too, glad I ran across this poem today. What a day brightener. Keep on writing and sharing your work with us. Karen
Date: 1/5/2009 5:48:00 AM
This simplicity of words fit together with beauty. A very nice morning read... Lucinda
Brian Strand
Date: 12/31/2008 3:08:00 AM
You capture the image flavour Farah.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments
christopher higgins
Date: 12/30/2008 8:55:00 AM
Wonderful Haiku young one(I love that you signed that after commenting) You don't write like the young but more the talented one..beautiful Haiku my friend..I love the water, and the bright sky, all great images..Love, Chris.
Raul Moreno
Date: 12/29/2008 12:47:00 PM
Excellent haiku Farah, it reminds me of the haiku's my friend Steve Edmonds writes. You painted a lovely scene with your words. I hope you have a Happy and safe New Year.
Laura Mckenzie
Date: 12/28/2008 8:07:00 PM
UHHA Farah Lovely Haiku indeed I love the last line! Happy New Year! Laura :)
John Rhinem
Date: 12/28/2008 6:53:00 PM
Smile~You see~these are the moments to always keep your eyes upon, as much as is possible~never take a moment of life for grantite, or waste even one breath if you can help it!? "Hello Again Precious & Gifted Farah Chamma!"~This write was almost like a serene painting, which you stroked with the brush of your pretty pen~very lovely dear young lady! Smile~"You are a unique treasure among your peers~so always shine brightly!"~"Much Love To You & Yours, Always, John!"~"Happy New Year!":)
Sean Kelly
Date: 12/28/2008 11:15:00 AM
Nice , warm , perfect Haiku of clear H2o ... Well done TYone :) .....
Date: 12/27/2008 5:20:00 PM
I'm smiling too. I enjoyed this poem. Nice use of imagery to convey your thoughts. Keep up the good writing. I wish you a wonderful New Year! Karen
jay del fierro
Date: 12/27/2008 12:11:00 PM
very well done,my young friend...the usage of this short format,to convey the allegory of the levels of water we all swim....i'm smiling with you dear Farah :)....hope all is well,and enjoy the new coming year......always , jay
Michael Jordan
Date: 12/27/2008 12:10:00 PM
Hi Farah - How are you - Wonderful Haiku - Though everything you write is as precious as the writer - God Bless you, YF4L, MJ
Kristin Reynolds
Date: 12/27/2008 8:09:00 AM
What a crystal clear image, and so beautiful. :) Ahhh, as I sit amongst piles and piles of snow and ice! Lovely, love, Kristin
sharon weimer
Date: 12/27/2008 6:49:00 AM
Oh Farah, this makes me wish I were there! How crystal clear and beautiful. I love seagulls, too. Wonderful! I will dream for a while. Love, shar