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Your Haunting Face

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Your Haunting Face

Could it be you who's in my mind
 flirting like a leaf in summertime
  or is this merely an illusion,
   or a dream deep in my past?

    I hear the music from the sky 
     flow with a sad face in my mind
      and it is coming all the while,
       could it be you who's in my mind?

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  1. Date: 11/28/2009 10:25:00 AM

    Very nice wording, Fred, so nice to meet u too, and thankxxx for the many comments and compliments on my poetry today... we have no great basketball teams on the East Coast that spark us to enjoy basketball as much as we do football... with a Dad and brother who played it was hard not to get crazy over football... like baseball too.. if u care to read "The Bronx Bombers" and "Sports Nut Craze" u might enjoy... keep writing and sharing ... luv.. Linda-Marie, P.E.P.S. "Sweetheart"

  1. Date: 12/26/2008 10:46:00 PM

    Cleverly conceived! ('she' rather than 'her' I think, since she's the subject...) ...neat repetition of your first line brings the piece sharply into focus. Well done! Best wishes, Keith

  1. Date: 12/24/2008 6:44:00 AM

    Merry Christmas Fred. A beautiful poem. Wishing you all the joy your heart can hold in the new year. Love & hugs, Shar xoxo

  1. Date: 12/24/2008 6:09:00 AM

    Oh my...this is lovely, makes me want to hum it!! ~ Merry Christmas, Fred!! Stay warm and comfy this holiday! ~ Love, Carrie

  1. Date: 12/24/2008 4:01:00 AM

    Wow, this is a lovely song, Fred. Merry Xmas, and happy new year! LOve Christie