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Ending His Crys

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Ending His Crys

I looked into his eyes
I got lost in their depth
A glance into the future
Revealing the secrets he kept

For so many years he cared too
Yet we were both afraid to say
We avoided each other completely...
Every time, simply another day

He cried to me one night.
~Please help, I don't know what to do~
I wrapped my arms around his body.
~It is okay now, I'm here with you~

He told me about his girlfriend,
She cheated, and hurt him bad...
I told him not to worry...
But in the inside I was getting mad.

I held back my anger...
And I comforted him instead.
Playing with his hair,
She lay still on my bed.

I leaned over to kiss his cheek,
He smiled and turned to me.
~Thank you for being there...
I Have finally learned to see~

With that he drifted off,
I left her quietly sleeping.
~How could anyone want to hurt him? ~
I ran through thoughts, my heart leaping.

I met up with his girlfriend,
Swung out of pure love and rage.
A knife stabbed through my stomach..
~God where were you today?~

My head smacking onto the pavement,
My breath getting thin...
My vision blurred and fading slowly...
This was a battle I could never win.

As this darkness consumes me...
Light fills my eyes...
I am proud to have lost my life,
If it meant ending his cries...



(I have recently discovered this poem being used on two different sites, where the poster
passed it off as their own. While it does indicate the poem was enjoyed it is also very
disheartening, to know someone would do it. )

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  1. Date: 12/16/2008 11:23:00 AM
    Beautifully written. i like... *Breana