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Night taking Day

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Night taking Day

The night is now part of day
winter has made blue grey
the cold days and colder nights have set
the sun, it seems, will never set.

In nine days, christmas bells will ring
and children, men and women will sing
but I will stay in my home, starved of fun
until May is here, with my friend, the sun.

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  1. Date: 12/16/2008 9:09:00 AM
    I loving this write Jonathan. The poem flows with some rhyming and the message is clear. Love the l third line of the second stanza. Good job!

  1. Date: 12/16/2008 8:55:00 AM
    I feel you on this one...great job.. *Breana