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The Day

The day stretched and began to stir.
it yawned and made 
leaves sway.
It showered in the mist and rain, 
then dressed in clouds of gray.
It worked its way through treetops,
had lunch on a
tranquil lake  
then laid down on the forest floor,
and took a
well earned break.

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  1. Date: 2/28/2009 11:16:00 AM

    This is just amazingly brilliant. I will make a copy to keep in my treasure box. this is the best part of Poetrysoup , finding these brilliant gems while just browsing.

  1. Date: 12/27/2008 5:03:00 PM

    Great imagination personifying the day. Nicely done. Vince

  1. Date: 12/16/2008 5:01:00 PM

    Cute, cute!! Love this write here, Celeste and if I haven't welcomed you to PoetrySoup yet well this is a great write to begin with!! Hope you have a warm, wonderful holiday and that '09 is a great year for you and yours!! I look forward to reading much more of your writing!!

  1. Date: 12/16/2008 7:27:00 AM

    Great poem, a wonderful ode to the day light hours...Raul

  1. Date: 12/16/2008 6:22:00 AM

    I love the way you made the day come alive. Beautiful description.