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Cool Mornings

A quiet stillness
That the fog reinforces;
Peaceful cool mornings.

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  1. Date: 12/19/2008 8:27:00 PM

    Steve, Very well written Haiku Your Friend Raul told me about YOU and YOUR 2 other Friends So much can be said in this Japanese Form It seems YOU and YOUR FRIENDS are taking Haiku to a higher Level Keep Writing YOUR fellow HAIKUER...HG

  1. Date: 12/14/2008 11:43:00 AM

    This is good too....I can't wait til you post more. DN

  1. Date: 12/14/2008 11:25:00 AM

    This is an excellent haikum. Nice 5-7-5 flow on it too. Your work is peaceful and refreshing. Relaxation is felt through your words. Keep up the good work.

  1. Date: 12/14/2008 12:16:00 AM

    The scene you have painted is very tranquil. Mornings are so peaceful and pleasant...good job...Raul

  1. Date: 12/13/2008 11:56:00 PM

    Ah! ...the tranquillity of early morning. You have captured the stillness very well here. Well done Steve! Best wishes, Keith