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In Dream

Blue bells swayed,
I felt no breeze,
as I walked, I walked.

It was in dream
but the aroma, oh,
so familiar.

Then a moment,
just as time,
I swam through
clouds.

I tried to run
but leaded feet
kept me at heel.

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  1. Date: 12/21/2008 10:52:00 AM

    "Bue bells swayed~I swam through clouds"~Amazing creativity here dear lady~so very wonderful and genuine!"~"Hello Precious & Beautiful Ann Anderson!"&what a very lovely write here dear! Is shows the purity of your tender heart~and "Your" true ability, as a gifted writer "Yourself!"~I hope your holidays are being showered with beauties for "You" dear!~And, "My Love & Warmth To 'You' Always, John!"~"Merry Christmas!"~Bye Dear:)

  1. Date: 12/12/2008 11:54:00 AM

    Hello my friend...love the ending...I am feeling a bit sad today and it just seems to fit my mood. Beautiful words and imagery..Love me

  1. Date: 12/12/2008 11:21:00 AM

    nice pen.