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Let it be

What tears me inside is 
Not  knowing the truth
Not knowing  why

Im alone or why he's with her
Why he's smiling back at me
Why he won't just let it be

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  1. Date: 4/9/2009 4:09:00 PM

    this is wat i call awesomeness i wonder who this is 2 lol but this is pure prettyness!!!!!!!!!!

  1. Date: 12/11/2008 7:26:00 PM

    Nice poem and thanks for the comments. On line 2 and 3 did you mean no in or Knowing, consider revising, It will help your poem.