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already yours

for your love i would do any thing
for anything you ask is possible
anything you want, it is my desire
that you have it

even the stars are not asking too much
because i can whisper words to make you
know there already yours

the sun on a cloudy day is what you'd feel
from the warmth of my arms around you

the full moon on a dark night is what you'd
see when you think of where my love is;
always over you

the ocean with waves that say: more love,
more love, more love, more love with infinite power
that covers the shore ever more, ever more

the mountains that reach the sky
and valleys that make the floor
the trees that give us air
and flowers that we love

i would do anything for you love
any thing you ask is possible
for you to have everything you want is my desire
any thing you want (is possible)






some what amateurish but a good start in the early 90's

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  1. Date: 4/11/2009 6:21:00 PM
    It is a very good poem....It reminds me of one of mine, I too think mine is very amateur, but when it comes from the heart, that is all that matters.

  1. Date: 12/23/2008 10:27:00 PM
    From the heart... the things we do in the name of love... & thanks for your comments. D.

  1. Date: 12/18/2008 11:27:00 PM
    I think this a wonderful write. So beautiful is the sentiment in this. We should want to fill all the desires of our lover. Great write. Thank you for your comments and for favoring my poem. I am doing the same with this. Love Robin

  1. Date: 12/18/2008 4:53:00 PM
    I thought this was very lovely! Could be seen as romantic, but also as God whispering His love to us. I did not think it was amateurish either, rather very heart-touching and honest. God bless and thanks :) very much for your kind words on my poetry. Happy Holidays to you and yours! Amy :)

  1. Date: 12/16/2008 12:34:00 PM
    Yes I agree with Rhoda this is a very good start, nothing wrong with it, a beautiful write.

  1. Date: 12/12/2008 3:15:00 PM
    The true expression of one's feelings can never be termed 'amateurish.' This is delightful with many good phrases and excellent imagery! Well done my friend!! Best wishes, Keith

  1. Date: 12/11/2008 1:25:00 PM
    You are such a romantic...I bet you even send flowers , and candy to that special one....not many like you anymore, at least not around here....always, Christy

  1. Date: 12/11/2008 12:32:00 PM
    Agian John you take my breath away with your wonderful way with words God bless and thank you for sharing.

  1. Date: 12/11/2008 11:32:00 AM
    deep sigh...

  1. Date: 12/11/2008 11:08:00 AM
    I like your poetry. It inspires me. And it's hard to dream when even in your dreams your so lost. I'm just trying to find my way back...