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thoughts running through my head

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thoughts running through my head

When you lay in bed at night
Do you think of me?
When you watch that movie we were supposed to view?
Did you ever wonder what I’m doing?
When you take her out to the movies,
Do you ever remember our last kiss?
And when you hug her goodbye,
Do you think of the way we ended?
They way we both magically vanished at the same time?
The way we both said goodbye with our full names
As if it was the end of the world
As if we were trying to hang on
But we know we couldn’t?
 As if our hearts were breaking at the same rate
At the same time
And we both knew that we were hurting each other.
So I wonder…do you ever think of me?
When you talk to her on the phone?
When you walk with her down the hallways?
When she follows you to your locker.
Do you ever think of me?

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  1. Date: 1/3/2009 3:35:00 PM
    pure emotion and energy and i feel every word of it. enjoyed reading it.

  1. Date: 12/9/2008 5:32:00 PM
    Very good job, good usage of words for discription. I know the feeling, I wrote one very similar to this once. Bravo!