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Come With Me

Come with me
to the music room;
familiar melodies,
out of the gloom!

Get up, hop in
to the city park;
feed the doves, 
out of the dark!

Life is a beach,
no, never a bitch;
rid of your cares,
without a stitch!

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  1. Date: 7/20/2009 4:15:00 AM

    Yes Freddie , never dilute !! . Your comments remind me of the old priest ,who suddenly heard lots of talk about " a quickie ". He had no idea what is was . One day at the convent , he asked a young nun , what is a quickie ? . She was highly indignent and replied " it's $25 , same as down-town !!... Keep well , ole buddy !! ..

  1. Date: 4/25/2009 1:31:00 AM

    A great write Wilfred...As always...I just wanted to go through your work =) How are you doing? I hope all is fine my friend..Take care... Farah, TYOne

  1. Date: 12/9/2008 10:27:00 AM

    PS without a stitch?! now your a nudist too? LOL Love me

  1. Date: 12/9/2008 9:32:00 AM

    Very interesting presentation , Wilfredo ....Much interactual connotation , to be absorbed, as it reveals a non-conforming reaction to all life's imponderable , idiosyncracies , which cannot possibly be diluted by reactionary overtones ... Very interesting .....

  1. Date: 12/9/2008 8:58:00 AM

    Must be all that "meditating" that has you in such a scrumptious mood this morning......LOL life is indeed a beach.....though we must watch out for the wooded spots....LOL

  1. Date: 12/9/2008 8:28:00 AM

    Postitive vibes this morning....just what we all need more of!! :) Fun, and laughter, and a romp in the park! Nice one to start the day! ~ Carrie

  1. Date: 12/9/2008 3:27:00 AM

    YAY! All of it sounds like fun, good for you, never seeing life as a bitch. lol love, Kristin