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spaces-PRE-EMPTIVE WAR GAME

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coming...ready ..or..not

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  1. Date: 12/8/2008 4:11:00 PM
    Yes, you could take this two different ways. One an extremely frightening scenario, and then the other as a child's game. Fill in the space indeed. Love, Shar

  1. Date: 12/8/2008 10:29:00 AM
    aww cute, reminded me of when w eused to play hide and seek, my husband likes playing reign of fire its kind of fun and bloodreign. anyway God bless love diane

  1. Date: 12/8/2008 6:43:00 AM
    This could be the countdown for something as serious as war...(God, help us!).......or something as carefree as playing 'Hide and Go Seek' as children. Let us pray it is always the innocent game children play. ~ Carrie

  1. Date: 12/8/2008 3:07:00 AM
    Man, is anyone ever 'ready' for this? I hope and pray we never have to know the answer. a frightening write, Brian. love, Kristin

  1. Date: 12/8/2008 1:24:00 AM
    Sounds like a perfect response to Fred's " Mysterious Man " ...... Tissues , at the ready , please .......