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when all stood still

Your eyes sparkle free but mine only sparkle 
On Command your smile is natural beauty mine is only 
Made your personality
Is so beautiful but not so much 

Your voice soft as the wind 
So irresistible mine rugged and captured
Your eyes so peaceful 

So if anyone looks in them 
Tme and space stop its self
And all would be still

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  1. Date: 4/1/2009 11:16:00 AM

    ahhh love. Put an "i" in "Time" :) Light & Love

  1. Date: 12/4/2008 1:21:00 PM

    Nice concept, loved the last stanza...Raul