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An Icicle - Haiku

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An Icicle - Haiku

Unable to move
Then kissed by the Sun of God
I am free at last

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  1. Date: 10/1/2009 9:08:00 AM
    I love this one. That is what our emotions become sometimes unless we are touched. Keep writing. Sara

  1. Date: 12/9/2008 1:14:00 PM
    Excellent haiku, brilliantly written love the concept...Raul

  1. Date: 12/5/2008 8:55:00 PM
    The combination of haiku and personification is really fitting... wonderful :) Teri

  1. Date: 12/5/2008 3:36:00 PM
    Your poetry never ceases to amaze and dazzle me! This haiku is both timeless and breathtaking! Peace always and have a Happy & Healthy Holiday season. John

  1. Date: 12/5/2008 10:51:00 AM
    An icicle, loosed by nature and thus by God... beautiful! Love, Keith

  1. Date: 12/5/2008 9:21:00 AM
    Lots of double meanings here, Elaine!! Great job with this remarkable haiku.

  1. Date: 12/4/2008 1:33:00 PM
    a beautfful piece of poetry. thank you for reading my blue river and for your comment

  1. Date: 12/3/2008 7:42:00 PM
    Dear Elaine, Very well done Haiku I assume it is in Seashell Islands' member contest Winter Solstice Good Luck LOVEYOUr POETIC Talent.. .HG

  1. Date: 12/3/2008 7:18:00 AM
    Good job on this one..the second line is inspired..isnt it fun when one really comes this one? BG

  1. Date: 12/3/2008 1:01:00 AM
    Nice play on words Elaine.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments

  1. Date: 12/2/2008 11:28:00 PM
    heyyyyyy amazing ! :)

  1. Date: 12/2/2008 12:42:00 PM
    A personification haiku! So amazing and beautifully visual. Love, Shar

  1. Date: 12/2/2008 10:08:00 AM
    This is so beautiful, a wonderful image you have portrayed here. Thank you for your wonderful comment on my poem, I appreciate it. :) It's actually about my Dad. Thanks again Blessings, ~Michaela~

  1. Date: 12/2/2008 9:47:00 AM
    Elaine A beautiful thought from beautiful you. Enjoyed. Happy safe Holidays to you and yours. Love Light Truth Patricia

  1. Date: 12/2/2008 9:38:00 AM
    Wonderful haiku, and I just love the phrase "Sun of God" ~Juliane

  1. Date: 12/2/2008 9:33:00 AM
    So cute, and clever. I can see this happy icicle finally letting go!! ~ Carrie

  1. Date: 12/2/2008 9:13:00 AM
    Clever piece , Elaine , in perfect format .... Rgds , Drip.. Drip.. Drip..Drip.......