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The Mirror

So many faces
looked out from my mirror
all wanting answers
to the life I have led.

Some of them dreamers
some true believers
some wanting demons
to lay and to rest.

But I am a dreamer
sometimes a believer
I danced with demons,
did I do my best?

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  1. Date: 3/26/2009 8:09:00 AM

    OH YES YOU DID....YOU EVEN CREATED A SMILE WHERE ONE COULD NOT BE FOUND....MY FACE....THANKS I NEEDED THAT!!!!!!!!!!!

  1. Date: 12/3/2008 7:02:00 AM

    Ah yes... Brits DO make the best poets! This is marvelous Ann... love your final two lines. A thinking person's poem! Love, Keith

  1. Date: 12/1/2008 4:57:00 PM

    I bet you danced lovely and did your darnest. I love this wonderful write. The second verse spanks! I have a few demons that I want to say goodbye to...lol...awesome write my long distance friend. Much love, Chris.

  1. Date: 12/1/2008 10:49:00 AM

    This reminds me of Michaels, "Man in the Mirror." I like poems that make me stop and think. Well done.

  1. Date: 12/1/2008 10:44:00 AM

    This is really fabulous. That old introspection can get us every time. Wondering what we would have changed, and what we could have accomplished. "So many faces looked out from my mirror..."Amazing write my friend. Love Christie