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The creation of Andrew

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The creation of Andrew

Inside the Sistine dome
of her mind
the superstar with the white shirt
open to the navel,
floating on a cloud
of ecstatic music,
are reaching out a hand
to a boy called Andrew,
clothed in nothing;
his initiative draped lazily
over his thigh.

Her hair flowing just right,
matching the colour code
of her attire,
she holds out a hand to him,
allowing a curve to show half hidden
for later exploration.

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  1. Date: 11/27/2008 1:41:00 PM
    This is really brilliant. Thank you for your comment on Tavern of Take. I appriciate the kind critisism, for, you have a lot of talent. I did intend for it to be cryptic.... I write like that on quite a few things. I have a hard time spilling it all out for an audience. Perhaps I will take your suggestion to heart next time. Love C

  1. Date: 11/27/2008 1:17:00 AM
    Thanks for the comment, Derrick. Women stimulate my imagination in all guises!

  1. Date: 11/26/2008 11:50:00 PM
    a fully covered women stirs the amagination of men, great write.