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When the Fog Rolls in Again

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When the Fog Rolls in Again

When the fog rolls in again
and the clock strikes three plus ten,
uniforms on medals pinned,
phantoms twisting in the wind.

Phantoms twisting in the wind,
those who let the demons in
see the truth with cold chagrin,
stand and face your mortal sin.

Stand and face your mortal sin,
thus the healing may begin,
shield your ears from Hade's din,
let not the devil's legions win.

Let not the devil's legions win,
behold the omen's earthly twin,
pounding hail on roofs of tin,
when the fog rolls in again.

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  1. Date: 1/9/2010 2:01:00 AM

    Conrats on you feature this week. I love this..a poetry form we dont use very much but I like it. I hope you are feeling better..let us know. BG

  1. Date: 1/8/2010 8:32:00 AM

    AWESOME! Danielle. Sincerely, Elaine

  1. Date: 1/8/2010 12:47:00 AM

    Wow, great monorhyme, Danielle. Congratulations! Love, Iolanda

  1. Date: 1/5/2010 3:57:00 PM

    Congratulations on your poem being featured this week on the Soup, dear Danielle! Peace, Audrey

  1. Date: 1/5/2010 3:45:00 PM

    Danielle, Congratulations on your poem being featured this week on the Soup! Peace, Audrey

  1. Date: 1/5/2010 8:50:00 AM

    Many congratulations on your fine poetry being featured this week Danielle, Happy New Year to you >> James,xx

  1. Date: 1/4/2010 2:00:00 PM

    Beautiful write here, Danielle in a form I haven't yet tried ... might be interesting to learn ... smile ... Reminds me of yesteryears in San Francisco ... smile ... great imagery and a great selection to be featured this week! Congratulations!

  1. Date: 1/4/2010 8:41:00 AM

    Congrats Danielle on your featured poem this week on Soup.. well written ... may your new year be filled with blessings... luv... creativeness.. friendships... health... luv... Linda-Marie

  1. Date: 1/4/2010 8:04:00 AM

    I see this one who faces the fog night after night....this world of fear, and illness, and facing the demons!.... your words are haunting and excellent, Danielle. I hope you have faced your own, and are doing much better. Love, Carrie

  1. Date: 1/4/2010 7:46:00 AM

    "Pounding hail on roofs of tin." I love this line. Congrats on the selection. Do you know the Nicolo Paganini legend? Love, daver

  1. Date: 1/4/2010 3:10:00 AM

    Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Danielle. May you have may more. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 1/4/2010 12:22:00 AM

    Congrats on your feature this week Danielle.Rgds Brian

  1. Date: 10/19/2009 5:48:00 AM

    A POWERFUL MASTERFUL MONORHYME! Congratulations on your win, Danielle. Love, Lainie

  1. Date: 10/15/2009 6:44:00 PM

    congratulations on your win

  1. Date: 10/14/2009 11:30:00 AM

    Many congratulations in this 2009 contest, well done >> James

  1. Date: 10/14/2009 4:14:00 AM

    Congratulations on your well deserved Win with this excellent poetry, Danielle! Love, Robin

  1. Date: 10/14/2009 4:03:00 AM

    Congratulations on your win in the June,2009 contest sponsored by PoetrySoup Danielle. Love,Carol

  1. Date: 10/13/2009 10:27:00 PM

    Congratulations on your poem. Great work and well deserved. Catch you up the trail ~<><

  1. Date: 10/13/2009 8:14:00 PM

    Danielle congratulations on placing in the finals. Very fluid and wonderful imagery.

  1. Date: 10/13/2009 7:37:00 PM

    Hi Danielle, Congratulations on your poem winning in the finals! So happy for you. Love Light Truth Patricia

  1. Date: 10/13/2009 7:06:00 PM

    So well done, Danielle.....you made it to the very end with this wonderful poem!! Congratulations on this wonderful honor!!! Love, Carrie

  1. Date: 9/24/2009 3:54:00 PM

    Three poems selected to make into the finals!! Congratulations Danielle!!! ~ Carrie

  1. Date: 9/24/2009 12:44:00 PM

    Danielle, congratulations in getting past round one of the competition >> James,x

  1. Date: 11/26/2008 12:13:00 AM

    Yes, but was the poem ITSELF any good?

  1. Date: 11/25/2008 6:03:00 PM

    Now I'm back where I started from. Who determines which ones are mortal? There I go thinking again. Have a wonderful day. Vince