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Game

Though I rest my weary head
The way is barred to slumber’s bed
Fare thee wells still left unsaid
Too long walked these roads to shed

Gate is tall and closed fast
My greatest fear I find surpassed
How could it be that this comes to pass?
I am defeated here at last

Night in sky whispers regret
Of endless travels I can’t forget
Abandoned by those still unmet
I sit and dwell on my plans, upset

“Let it go,” windy whispers spout
“Worry no more for this ‘round-a-bout”
“Tomorrow, victory!” I stand and shout
I turn, I sit and then I log out.

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  1. Date: 5/12/2009 6:13:00 AM
    Congratulations on your poetry making it into the semi finals. Wishing you the best of luck in the finals. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 5/3/2009 9:45:00 PM
    Alison, my belated congrats in making the semi finals...Raul

  1. Date: 3/20/2009 11:10:00 PM
    Congratulations on your awesome poetry being featured this week..Very intriguing...(Worry no more for this ‘round-a-bout” “Tomorrow, victory!” I stand and shout) I loved this line... Knowing that you can go to sleep, wake up and then start ALL over...Nicely done~GB, Tyesha

  1. Date: 3/20/2009 10:48:00 PM
    I loved what your poem said to me; I can empathize and I commend you for being able to express these feelings so poetically. I wish the meter was more in sync, though. If this bothers you, email me and we can tweak it. ***Danielle***

  1. Date: 3/19/2009 11:53:00 AM
    Congrats Alison on "Game" being featured this week on Poetry Soup. Vince

  1. Date: 3/17/2009 3:51:00 PM
    Oh so uplifting toward the end and truly real indeed! Congratulations on your wonderfully done poem being featured! Laura :)

  1. Date: 3/17/2009 12:42:00 PM
    on real this poem was hot and i like how you end the poem with i turn i sit and then i log out.

  1. Date: 3/16/2009 10:22:00 PM
    i have made your poem a favorite because it is so rich in nuances, a very beautiful thing. God Bless You

  1. Date: 3/16/2009 5:37:00 PM
    Congratulations on your wonderful poetry being featured this week! Love, Shar

  1. Date: 3/16/2009 5:35:00 PM
    Great expression of emotion in this one. Beautiful rhyme and flow. Congratulations on being featured this week.

  1. Date: 3/15/2009 1:57:00 PM
    Nice use of rhyme to convey your thoughts in this poem. Congratulations on having it featured. Keep on writing! Karen

  1. Date: 3/15/2009 12:43:00 PM
    Great write here Alison that for me captures the frustration of words demanding to be written at the most unlikely times .. LOL ... love this one and its a wonderful selection to be a feature this week here at the Soup. Congratulations!

  1. Date: 11/22/2008 12:30:00 PM
    Great write, Alison. Reminds me of many a late night/early morning of online RPGs. Love, Nigel