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Never Look Back

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Never Look Back

Captivated by the rising tide, alone she stood

On a solemn piece of rock. The darkness

Lingered over; correcting her daylight.

Death in its inevitability took the form of ocean.

Amidst the fleeting light, an absence and 

Neglect writhed behind her eyes,

Draining her malevolence, turning it to fear.

A tapestry of thought weaved onto her shoulder,

Lethargy strained through her. Never fighting the

Overpowering desire to sleep. One foot first,

Never look back, for the

End, is here.

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  1. Date: 5/18/2009 1:58:00 PM

    Great acrostic you have here! i like the painting of words you have created, and thanks for the comments! Keep writing these my friend!

  1. Date: 3/1/2009 3:59:00 AM

    Very creative. A great use of imagery. Continue to share.

  1. Date: 2/28/2009 10:31:00 AM

    Nice use of imagery. Interesting use of this challenging acrostic form. Thank you for sharing your thoughts with us and for your kind words on my poem. Have a nice day. Karen

  1. Date: 12/16/2008 5:32:00 PM

    Great painting of words.....Very Nice

  1. Date: 12/9/2008 9:09:00 PM

    Whoops! sorry to double up on you... still a great piece! K.

  1. Date: 12/9/2008 9:08:00 PM

    A cleverly contrived ACROSTIC... superb language and imagery. BRAVO my friend! Best wishes, Keith

  1. Date: 11/30/2008 1:57:00 PM

    AWESOME Poem!! I love the line 'for the End, is here.' Great Write!! ^.^ Love Alexz

  1. Date: 11/22/2008 11:37:00 PM

    This is such a well written poem Great imagery and very clever acrostic. Very moving. It makes me want to reach out to her. Robin

  1. Date: 11/19/2008 6:33:00 PM

    Conor, great acrostic you have here! Thanks for you comment and welcome to poetry soup. A community of great poets and friends! Enjoy your stay and may God bless you...Raul

  1. Date: 11/19/2008 4:50:00 PM

    Very cleverly constructed! I don't usually enjoy ACROSTICS 'cos they're so clumsy and obvious... This flows well; cunningly disguised! Best wishes, Keith

  1. Date: 11/19/2008 3:55:00 PM

    Wow. Awesome acrostic. Didn't even read like one which adds to it's excellence! Well done! Love, Shar

  1. Date: 11/19/2008 12:41:00 PM

    Well done, Michael! It makes me want to try this form of poetry...you did it so well! ~ Carrie

  1. Date: 11/19/2008 11:22:00 AM

    This is a fantastic Acrostic, my new friend! Talented write. Sad contents, and truthful take on that angst one feels at that moment in time. Love Christie

  1. Date: 11/19/2008 10:41:00 AM

    great read my friend!