Submit Your Poems
Get Your Premium Membership


Quote of the Day

Quote Left"The harder you work, the luckier you get."Quote Right

by Gary Player

  |  Comment

I Don't Love You

Elizabeth Neal Avatar    Block poet from commenting on your poetry

Below is the poem entitled I Don't Love You which was written by poet Elizabeth Neal. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

Read Poems by Elizabeth Neal

Best Elizabeth Neal Poems

+ Fav Poet

I Don't Love You

When I saw you yesterday  
You lied a liittle more.
And now lookin' at you
I'm showing you the door.

You told me you loved me
You said you'd be there.
Now go and let me be
'Cause what I need is rare.

Why are you still here?
I told you we were through.
You need to get your things
'Cause I don't love you.

Post Comments

Please Login to post a comment
  1. Date: 12/23/2008 6:32:00 PM
    Elizabeth, Welcome to the SOUP Very clever is this the second half of YOUR Qutrain "I Want You to Know" one thought 2 POEMS Ingenious I have read YOUR Haikus "fall" and "Summer" and YOUR Senryu "Ashley" Very similar to another POET on this site wiyh the same Surname Again Welcome Merry Christmas and may the New Year bring YOU and YOURS Health and Prosperity...HG

  1. Date: 12/17/2008 6:28:00 AM
    A poem that reflects much inner strength. Great heartfelt write. Happy Holidays. Love Robin

  1. Date: 11/15/2008 9:49:00 AM
    Welcome to poetry soup where you are amongst good company. Nice touching poem...Raul