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Reflection

I stand upon a time
on footed thought, regret,
I want to make my path clear
from obstacles, neglect.

Seeds full grown
by my hand that sowed to plough,
I could have done much better
but what can I do now?

Forgiveness we all welcome,
sorry an easy clause,
it's far to late and overdue
when knocking at deaths doors.

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  1. Date: 11/18/2008 7:34:00 AM

    I like your 'clause/doors' rhyme, and your last two lines particularly. Excellent message well expressed... Best wishes, Keith

  1. Date: 11/12/2008 6:08:00 AM

    Excellent write in this piece. In the last stanza third line is that suppose to be to or too? I am digging your talent and voice.

  1. Date: 11/11/2008 8:08:00 AM

    Excellent poem Ann we reap what we sow your comments are appreciated would love your insight on mypoems. Michael Torres