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I Cry

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I Cry

Bud's smile lingers me
Eternity lasts a while
When I laugh, I cry

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  1. Date: 11/30/2012 7:28:00 PM
    Mohammad, the haiku means a lot to me.. why so tears always follow... loving your haiku.. always~ PD

  1. Date: 4/16/2009 12:45:00 PM
    Beautiful. Should it read as: Bud's smile lingers me (5cyllab.), and... Eternity lasts a while (7cyllab.), and keep the 3rd line. All the best.

  1. Date: 11/29/2008 12:27:00 PM
    This takes place most of the time in life. There are times when we are overjoyed and laughter turns to tears. I can see the imagery clearly. Great job! ~Joseph

  1. Date: 11/27/2008 11:50:00 AM
    Hello Mohammad This touched me, and yes I smiled then somehow wanted to cry, very moved by this . Take care Ann.

  1. Date: 11/19/2008 11:42:00 AM
    A very deep and personal haiku, filled with beauty...Best wishes, Sara:)

  1. Date: 11/18/2008 4:49:00 PM
    Much to think about in just three lines. The last line says so much. Nice use of this concise form. Thank you for sharing it with us. Karen

  1. Date: 11/11/2008 5:16:00 AM
    Truly amazing three lines here. That last line is a killer. Excellent. Love, Shar

  1. Date: 11/10/2008 4:33:00 PM
    Oh man, what a powerful 3 lines - excellent expression, beautiful. love Kristin

  1. Date: 11/10/2008 4:12:00 PM
    Wow..this means so much. You write like those Urdu poets I've read so far. Wonderfully expressed. Take care always!! Love, Chitra

  1. Date: 11/10/2008 3:01:00 PM
    such a significance of meaning within this write, some times the less said the better, I love the last line, and thanks for your encouraging comments, hope that all is well with you, take care D-ncye

  1. Date: 11/10/2008 2:26:00 PM
    Very nicely done Mohammad so true. Great metaphores. Beautiful creation of your's thank you for sharing Michael Torres