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Angry Skies

the thunder roared
like an angry lion
the lightning bursts into
a perfusion of colors

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  1. Date: 12/1/2008 4:20:00 AM

    an amazing piece of work. this is indeed a great work :) keep writing and keep sharing things with us, u r very talented white :) keep rocking ! Love and peace.AMAAN!

  1. Date: 11/9/2008 12:44:00 PM

    Your canvas of mind has produced an exhilerating Light Poetry -a remarkable painting of words. A beauiful write. Thanks for your rich and thoughtful comments on my poem Obstinate Heart.

  1. Date: 11/6/2008 10:42:00 AM

    Beautiful write my dear. This is bright and very colorful. Keep up the good work Deneen. Love, Chris.

  1. Date: 11/6/2008 7:23:00 AM

    LIKED THE IMAGERY! GOOD TITLE TOO. THIS COULD GO ON A MAGNET!! COOL!

  1. Date: 11/6/2008 5:35:00 AM

    A well written vision of nature. I love storms. You have excellent imagery here. Love, shar

  1. Date: 11/5/2008 10:06:00 PM

    Deneen, I really enjoy your wonderful imagination and your creative style when you compose to present your readers with such a vivid image. You are a very gifted artist as I applaud you for a job well done... MPK

  1. Date: 11/5/2008 6:34:00 PM

    a beautiful poem of color and sound - real. love Kristin

  1. Date: 11/5/2008 3:52:00 PM

    So vivid and explosive. Wow great write. God bless Michael Torres thanks for your caring comments.