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Hurt

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Hurt

When I look into your eyes 
It’s like I am alive
When I touch your hands
It’s like the world ends
When I feel you breathing near me
You can hear my heart skip a beat
We had fun and all the special moments

And then it stopped

I stopped

You hurted me with your lies
And all your fake smiles
But most off all
You hurted me with
Every touch you gave

I will never forget the good 
But will always have the bad

You ruined me, but at the same time
You made me, me
So I thank you for that 
And the fact that, thanks to you
I am me!

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  1. Date: 11/19/2008 8:33:00 AM
    Welcome to PoetrySoup. Please continue with your writing and share it with the world. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 11/15/2008 11:46:00 AM
    welcome to poetry soup, this is a good write of expression, you will find a love that will love you for you. God healed my hurt twice round, but now I have the most beautiful husband in the world,, god bless you from diane and welcome to soup.

  1. Date: 11/12/2008 10:25:00 AM
    Keep up the great work. This work is awesome. The best way to express yourself is through poetry. Just remember although they have broken your heart, you will always learn from the hurt.

  1. Date: 11/7/2008 11:07:00 AM
    You have talent my friend....I say when it comes to writing down emotions you must only be true... and so you are!

  1. Date: 11/5/2008 1:08:00 PM
    A reason for everything, the good with the bad. One of life's learning experience helping create the person you are. Wonderful poetry. Welcome to PoetrySoup. Love, Shar

  1. Date: 11/5/2008 5:19:00 AM
    So true most of us are made by what others do to define us is to see the one that is hidden under what others have done, keep on writing on.