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Fried Egg

On the pan she cracks on the edges
Flows in her white gold love rashes;
Wet to oil, bottoms turn up in fumes
Sigh, sizzles to burns in her top cues.
 
Hot as roasted, spiced in cheekiness,
Crusts within the silky ceramic lust:
Fingers feel cling to the push shove
Tongue melts into lick, flip; lip sucks.  

Molds fold with in the hardness cuts.
Aroma breaks the churning of beats,
Touches to heap and urge the squeals 
Lifts and drops akin to the greasy eel.

Life is passion in word promises
Beauty in metaphors is my trust.

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  1. Date: 6/21/2009 2:35:00 PM
    Love his One Garg:)

  1. Date: 6/6/2009 9:45:00 AM
    jai,...this one blew me away,..I loved It ! and congrats on your well deserved win ! james

  1. Date: 6/2/2009 4:03:00 PM
    Congrats Jai on your win in the contest. Vince

  1. Date: 6/1/2009 4:44:00 PM
    Congratulations on your win, Jai. I especially like the last two lines of the poem. All best, Orma

  1. Date: 6/1/2009 7:17:00 AM
    Congratulatios Jai on your win. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 6/1/2009 3:56:00 AM
    Warmest congrats on your awesome win! Love, Shar

  1. Date: 6/1/2009 12:08:00 AM
    Accept my warm and honest congratulations on your lovely poem being featured. Ernilando

  1. Date: 5/31/2009 10:12:00 PM
    Awesome write here Jai. I'm not familar with your writing (there are tooooooo many folks at the Soup ... smile) but I look forward to reading more of your writing. Congratulations on your win in the contest!!

  1. Date: 5/31/2009 12:39:00 PM
    Congratulations on your 6th place finish in the contest. Enjoy your honor. Keep on writing! Karen

  1. Date: 5/31/2009 11:59:00 AM
    This sounds like a breakfast omelets. It's certainly appealing to the senses, especially smell, taste, and sight. Great job! ~Joseph

  1. Date: 5/31/2009 9:26:00 AM
    My warmest congratulations to you dear on your awesome 6th placement… you are such a wonderful writer… please let your poetry pen keep dancing to the drum beat of your passions and poetrysoup-land. You are great. leke

  1. Date: 5/31/2009 7:00:00 AM
    Congratulations on your poem being placed > James

  1. Date: 5/31/2009 5:23:00 AM
    Congrats on your win Jai!

  1. Date: 5/31/2009 3:40:00 AM
    Congratulations on your win!

  1. Date: 5/31/2009 3:32:00 AM
    A lovely feeling hungry poem. Congrats on your winning.

  1. Date: 5/31/2009 12:58:00 AM
    Congrats to you, Jai, on your success 6th place in PS contest, well done! Ernesto

  1. Date: 5/31/2009 12:49:00 AM
    Uh, congrats indeed, you know how to glorify a moment, make it more than a daily life period, turn breakfast into poetry, now, that is amazing @.@ thanks a lot for the experience C= bye bye

  1. Date: 5/30/2009 11:07:00 PM
    Jai - congratulations on placing in the soup contest finals God Bless, MJ

  1. Date: 5/3/2009 2:03:00 PM
    Jai, my belated congrats in making the semi finals...Raul

  1. Date: 4/10/2009 5:43:00 AM
    Congratulations on your poetry making it into the semi finals. Wishing you the best of luck in the finals. Love, Carol

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