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Skyline

the magnetic pull..
of the way the...
ocean meets...
the sky...
where does one end...
and the other begin...


WHO IS THE AUTHOR OF
THIS MASTERPIECE
THE ALMIGHTY GOD

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    Joseph Spence Sr
    Date: 11/2/2008 6:03:00 PM
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    This is really touching. I also like your question at the end. This reminds me of the sunset in the Caribbean. The sky always seems to unite with the blue sea on the horizon, thus giving a royal blend of God's grace for all to enjoy it beauty. This is an awesome job! ~Joseph

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    Sue Mason
    Date: 10/31/2008 9:48:00 PM
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    The horizon is a tricky thing ... thats why folks used to think the world was flat ... smile ... wonderful write here Deneen!
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    Vince Suzadail Jr.
    Date: 10/31/2008 6:56:00 PM
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    There are some things science will never explain, and faith will be the answer. Vince
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    christopher higgins
    Date: 10/31/2008 7:56:00 AM
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    Very well written Deneen. Beautiful picture painted.
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    Kristin Reynolds
    Date: 10/31/2008 3:31:00 AM
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    A gorgeous visual here, and a heart a true fith and love. love Kristin
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    Mohammad Yamin
    Date: 10/30/2008 6:00:00 PM
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    A beautiful poem reflecting infinity. Very thoughtful, indeed. I recall one of the Quatrains from my book Rubai'yat of Josh Malihabadi - A Drop and the Ocean which reads: My nerves were seized by a strong current. In an immense measure my energy spent. The moment I placed an atom on my palm. The wieght of the entire solar system descent. Thanks also for your valuable comments on my poem The Inexhaustible Love. -Mohammad


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