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so it goes

Wind howls.
Gulls cry.

Tides turn.
Seas sigh.

The moon pulls.
Light tricks.

You go.
The clock ticks.


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  1. Date: 9/29/2009 1:52:00 PM

    I felt you were describing what i can here right now, with my bedroom window open the wind howling and the sea high. x

  1. Date: 11/15/2008 3:19:00 PM

    Yes, All things have a season! We can't stop time, but we can enjoy the moments. Thanks for a great write!! Wood

  1. Date: 11/14/2008 6:17:00 AM

    ...death and taxes! So much beauty is beyond our control... thank goodness! Nature's grandeur keeps US under control I think... Best wishes, Keith

  1. Date: 10/30/2008 2:55:00 PM

    bravo maggie.

  1. Date: 10/26/2008 1:07:00 PM

    Love this Maggie. Each little verse holds vivid, almost mystical imagery and so much more. A perfect example of how less is more. Also, a quick thank you for your comment on Michael's poem for me. That was lovely and so appreciated. Meanwhile, you are a huge talent, and I look forward to reading more. Warmest wishes, Shar

  1. Date: 10/22/2008 11:40:00 PM

    Nice one Maggie.Thanks for your welcome observations.L2 was a transcription slip from paper to PC and will think further about your suggestions for the last couplet.Rgds Brian