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The Sun's Call

Tonight, I shall rest
Tomorrow I don't know if I shall wake up
But today, I shall enlighten you with Nescafe in a cup
For I am the sun that is about to set

Tonight, the moon shall crest
Tomorrow night might take my place
But today, I was able to enjoy my grace
For one day, I might take the test

Today, I spread my rays
Tomorrow I might get a cold
But today, all i need is a soft breeze to hold
For I would like to enjoy my days

Life is a lantern; no one knows when it shall be put off
So always do what is right and never wait for tomorrow

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  1. Date: 1/18/2009 11:54:00 PM

    Thank you for supporting my contest Sara.Rgds Brian

  1. Date: 11/1/2008 7:27:00 PM

    Good advice! Vince

  1. Date: 10/24/2008 10:30:00 PM

    how inspirational! great poem and advice! thanks for your comments too!

  1. Date: 10/17/2008 1:00:00 PM

    A wonderfully inspiring write Sara; so much so that I am spurred to write a sonnet as I have not tried this form before. Your friend, Nigel