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Suicide

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Suicide

You stand on the roof.
Do. You?
Sun witness your jump.
Should. You?

Lets try one more chance!
..Too late.
Forget and give up.
Your fate.

Ten floor to the earth. 
-Be glad.
Meet shadow and taste.
Your death.

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  1. Date: 10/22/2008 3:10:00 PM
    Really missing your poems, Marianna, and hoping we can look forward to further postings soon. Nigel

  1. Date: 10/18/2008 4:51:00 PM
    I like your poem I used to want to jump actually I still do sometimes not because I'm depressed but because i wanna fall you left a comment on one of my poems saying thank you, I was just kinda wondering what you were thanking me for

  1. Date: 10/15/2008 1:27:00 PM
    no pictures e-mail jhlovingiii@hotmail.com glad to hear you survived because i've been there. john

  1. Date: 10/14/2008 5:25:00 PM
    such a sad and poignant write, take care D-nyce

  1. Date: 10/14/2008 3:03:00 PM
    Sad, but very well written. In response to your comments in my blog, you have to be a paid premium to be able to post a blog of your own on Poetry Soup. ~Trudy~

  1. Date: 10/14/2008 1:44:00 PM
    wow! great work. true poets know only a few words well placed makes a very big difference. you have that key. John H. Loving III

  1. Date: 10/14/2008 12:19:00 PM
    Sad but true. Effective piece. Nice description. Sad tonic. blessings Michael

  1. Date: 10/14/2008 7:20:00 AM
    Wow! Meet shadow and taste is powerful and hard to see. I feel the pain in this piece and I can see the impact. Great imagery.