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Shadows

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Shadows

i dance in shadows
beckon behind dark walls breath
in shadows I hide

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  1. Date: 6/6/2009 6:54:00 AM
    Like the way L1/complements L3 Christie One for my favourites.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments.

  1. Date: 2/15/2009 11:09:00 AM
    A succulent nut inside a nut shell... I always find it so hard to comment on Haiku poems... ? Perhaps they say all that's needed to be said... ?

  1. Date: 10/20/2008 8:57:00 AM
    Christie , Great Haiku in the perfect format ...No need for you to be in any shadow, so step in to the sunlight with your varied and talented writing ... Thanks again for your kind words ....

  1. Date: 10/16/2008 3:30:00 PM
    I love the contrast between walls and breath, very deep. I have had a great day experimenting with new (to me) poetic forms - thank you from my heart for all your support. Always, Nigel

  1. Date: 10/13/2008 5:45:00 AM
    I must say I like the writing here as it stays well to form and flow while providing great imagery but I must also say, come out from behind there, do not dance alone nor hide. Michael

  1. Date: 10/13/2008 12:15:00 AM
    Like the enigma in this one Christie.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments

  1. Date: 10/12/2008 2:55:00 PM
    A mysterious haiku...has me wondering why, and who?? Good one! ~ Carrie