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The Spider

The thing was so repulsive, the scariest I've ever seen
It had claws and it was screaming and was a thousand times bigger than me

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  1. Date: 6/19/2009 11:43:00 AM

    nice. ha i like spiders jus not up close. lolz :D

  1. Date: 6/13/2009 1:26:00 PM

    Gosh, maybe I did wrong wording this poem because no one gets it. The screaming thing with claws is a human (woman with a manicure.) The narrator is the spider. I was just making a point that spiders are more afraid of us than we are of them.

  1. Date: 5/28/2009 1:23:00 PM

    If I saw a spider that big, I'd need to change my shorts. Vince

  1. Date: 5/23/2009 2:11:00 PM

    haha i love spiders there awesome! i hope it eats u! hehe jk=]]TinkBabyy

  1. Date: 10/24/2008 10:22:00 PM

    so cool! funny Wonder if the spider , did, indeed, bite er! great fun!

  1. Date: 10/14/2008 10:14:00 AM

    Love this! Write one about snakes now! My biggest fear! Thanks for your comment and yes, I do try and think up poetry that is unique.

  1. Date: 10/14/2008 3:08:00 AM

    You sound like my wife when she sees one ,a frequent experience at the time if year Deneith.Rgds Brian & thanks for your comments

  1. Date: 10/13/2008 1:34:00 AM

    No, you've got it wrong. The THING that's described is human...from the spider's point of view. Duh

  1. Date: 10/12/2008 10:10:00 AM

    That was a really horrible image of a spider. I think the same though. It seems so big. Loved reading it. Love, Chitra