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disingenuous

I wonder how your
arms can reach out when 
your eyes speak nothing 
of love; I ponder
the limits of faith;

I reflect on
your devotion
and contemplate
what you mean when

you tell me
that I should
focus on

only
what is

real

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  1. Date: 2/18/2009 3:19:00 PM

    Wonderfully insightful piece, Tracy! This hits the heart straight on! Donna

  1. Date: 10/10/2008 5:19:00 AM

    Very personal. Some people are difficult to understand indeed. Complex write. Get something different every time I reread it, but the main message is clear. Love, Shar

  1. Date: 10/9/2008 4:19:00 PM

    Very well written, and in perfect form. What another person thinks is real is not always what we see as real. Very real emotion throughout this.....Linda