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  1. Date: 5/28/2009 1:14:00 PM
    The animal lovers might be angry but it's better to eat than be eaten. Awesome ending. Vince

  1. Date: 4/10/2009 8:31:00 PM
    An image well created and then the surprise. BLAM! You do have a way with words. You use them to paint pictures. Nice job. Keep writing.

  1. Date: 10/11/2008 9:11:00 PM
    OK...I think you just killed Bambi's daddy.LOL. Wonderfully visual poem right to the end...and then BLAM!..Felt like I was the one that got it right between the eyes.LOL...Loved the end....Linda

  1. Date: 10/4/2008 12:10:00 PM
    I can picture him pouncing upon his prey....just like a National Geographic film! Nicely done!! ~Carrie