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Snapped

I can see into the future
Ashamed of what I see
That through the endless fighting
There are things I'll never be

You can see a thousand faces
That pass through every day
That look completely through you
In a devastating way

Why they never see me
I still don't understand
I never find success in things
And I'm broken where I stand

Confusion is so prevalent
In my understated life
And the deepness of my misery
Will cut me like a knife

Being so determined
Somehow i will survive
The numbness of my misery
It says I'm not alive

Where does this road lead too?
When will it ever end?
I'm a tree of fallen timber
For, I never learned to bend.

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  1. Date: 5/10/2009 5:26:00 PM
    Dear Christie,Congratulations on YOUR POEM "Snapped" being Featured this week Great Title YOUR Talent Shines ALWAYS...HG

  1. Date: 5/10/2009 2:12:00 AM
    Christie, nice work and congrats on your feature...Raul

  1. Date: 5/6/2009 2:14:00 PM
    artful insightful entertaining. i loved it and pondered on it. each phrase was where i was untill poetrysoup. and now i am somebody and so are you if you can write poetry like this. John H. Loving III

  1. Date: 5/5/2009 3:22:00 PM
    Christie Wonderful message deep in meaning I really enjoyed this my talented friend! Congratulations on your featured poem! Laura :)

  1. Date: 5/5/2009 6:35:00 AM
    Great writing as always. Congratulations on being featured this week. Smiles from Lolita

  1. Date: 5/4/2009 3:47:00 PM
    congrads on being featured. john

  1. Date: 5/4/2009 8:36:00 AM
    Yes!... the last two lines. How often I've thought just this way, expecting too much from life instead of simply living. Ya gots ta learn ta bend. Great write, Christie. Congrats to the judge for this one. Love, daver

  1. Date: 5/4/2009 7:28:00 AM
    Congratulations on "Snapped" being featured. I tell the kids I work with to stay stubborn. It's a necessary ingredient for success. Theirs is an ongoing battle but one that is won a step at a time. God Bless. Vince

  1. Date: 5/4/2009 6:42:00 AM
    Awsum and deep Christie! And congrats on "Snapped" being featured! james

  1. Date: 5/4/2009 6:39:00 AM
    Wow, so sorry I ever missed this one! Your talent knows no bounds! Warmest congrats on a most excellent featured write. Love, Shar

  1. Date: 5/4/2009 5:10:00 AM
    Christie, I never learned to bend either. So, I understand. I did learn to listen, though. That helped. Congratulations on your poem being featured this week. Love, Dane

  1. Date: 5/4/2009 3:50:00 AM
    Wonderful writing, Congratulations on being featured, kindest thoughts, Anna-Marie.

  1. Date: 5/4/2009 3:20:00 AM
    exelent work christie, God bless you from diane

  1. Date: 5/4/2009 1:06:00 AM
    Congrats on your feature this week Christie Rgds Brian

  1. Date: 5/3/2009 11:47:00 PM
    Christie, excellent write to be featured this week. Congratulations! I have also a featured write. Ernilando

  1. Date: 5/3/2009 8:40:00 PM
    I'm glad to see this beauty among the poems featured this week, Christie! Congratulations! Ruben.

  1. Date: 5/3/2009 7:24:00 PM
    Whatever you write, you capture your reader! Well deserving to be among the featured works this week, Miss Christie! ~ Well done as always~ love, Carrie

  1. Date: 2/15/2009 9:50:00 AM
    ... and those who cannot bend in the end; will break... a clear warning in the winds of fate

  1. Date: 1/31/2009 8:23:00 PM
    Nice quatrain, I jumped to your beginning on PS. Great write...Raul

  1. Date: 12/10/2008 4:56:00 PM
    and I just care about you and I feel maybe there is something lacking in your life. I am sorry if I stepped my bounds I in no way am here to tell you what to do. IL respect your gift and I admire it also. But the Christie I know is a loving caring women that is very special to me and you will always be that way. I hope I didnt offend and if your naughty and I dont comment I still Love you but i will comment on everything else. God bless you my sincerest admiration and love to you Michael

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