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October

Wood nymphs flittering;
All faerie wood emblazon;
Day lends length to night,
Impish pumpkins flicker winks;
As cats creep shadowed black.

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  1. Date: 7/16/2009 3:41:00 AM

    Claire it has been a while since you posted here at the Soup. You are missed. Hope all is well. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 10/18/2008 10:19:00 AM

    Nicely done, Claire. This wonderful Tanka is imaginative and embodies a spooky storybook feel to it! Congrats on your win in Kristin's contest. Peace always, John

  1. Date: 10/13/2008 9:35:00 AM

    Another win for you Claire !! Congratulations on a true mastery of the form and a winner in Kristin's contest. You've really captured the time change and everything ... smile ...

  1. Date: 10/12/2008 2:15:00 PM

    I like the whimsical feel of this poem. Nice use of personification. Congratulations on being one of the winners in Kristin's contest! Wishing you continued success with your writing. Karen

  1. Date: 10/12/2008 10:03:00 AM

    Congratulations Claire on your win in Kristin's contest! Well done! Love, Shar

  1. Date: 10/1/2008 1:12:00 PM

    Beautifully done Tanka...A little mystery along with the sense of autumn! ~Carrie

  1. Date: 10/1/2008 12:29:00 PM

    You've captured the magic of October. Enchanting. Awesome Tanka. Love, Shar