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  1. Date: 2/2/2010 4:54:00 PM
    Beautiful i love this <3

  1. Date: 1/26/2010 3:55:00 PM
    Excellent imagery, beautiful story (with purpose ... smile) and just delightful read here Deneith!! Thanks so much for bringing your talent to PoetrySoup!! I look forward to reading lots more from you and appreciate very much your recent comment ... I had to laugh when you said you thought ether was a bug killer ... its fun here at the Soup ... I have to look up words all the time too ... smile

  1. Date: 5/28/2009 2:18:00 PM
    This is a fantastic poem and it brings back many memories of my own special moments spent next to the sea during my youth and also as a grown man,Thank you for sharing, God bless you, Dean

  1. Date: 5/28/2009 1:12:00 PM
    I'm a 30 year Navy Reservist. This was a wonderful write. I love writes about the ocean. God Bless. Vince

  1. Date: 10/14/2008 10:18:00 AM
    This is wonderful having lived by the sea and I can vividly see what you write. Welcome to PoetrySoup.

  1. Date: 9/28/2008 9:42:00 PM
    So touching! A true poem of nature.

  1. Date: 9/28/2008 1:34:00 PM
    I like your use of extended metaphors in this poem. The descriptiveness of the piece impacts the sense of sight. The poem flows very well and presents vivid images. Great job and welcome to Poetry Soup! ~Joseph

  1. Date: 9/28/2008 8:48:00 AM
    I loved the way you characterized a lesson through a snail's shell which stands to be a home not many would care of. The way you dimmed the glow of treasure when anything, even a snail, withers...You have displayed a feature some have which is the way you feel for everything around. Beautifully written...Sara...