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A Misunderstanding

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A Misunderstanding

I regret the time, when, I left you alone,
You again, stopped me, but I did not care.
Things taught me, and time has shown,
Realise now I, “how could you then bear?”
You loved me much, now, how can I atone 
Just stand still, only, in the dark, to stare
I would love to be called back,”My love”
And share, the times, we were proud of.

I want back, all the warmth, you showered,
Your smiles, your hugs and your kisses.
Frighten me, why? With your face so glowered,
Don’t deny me, with my sweet reminisces.
I m repentant, for all your hopes, I devoured,
I have already cried a lot, in soft hisses.
You could not see the scars, beneath,
The sky was on me, I lost in the heath.
 
You insulted me at the public junction,
And threw away my composed song, apart.
Neither did you feel,why? any compunction,
With tears in my eyes, I had to depart. 
I met the disgrace at the function,
My heart seemed to break, into half.
I could not bear, your applause, for my rival,
The thing I repeatedly told you, for revival.

I m not alone, the one, to be blamed,
Although I walked away, time has been tough.
 All was not only my fault but you claimed.
Do forgive me now, don’t be rough,
I am saturated with, the pain I have tamed.
You’ll love me as before, I m sure enough.
We’ll again build our small cosy zoo
With no more differences between me and you.

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  1. Date: 5/12/2009 6:23:00 AM

    Congratulations on your poetry making it into the semi finals. Wishing you the best of luck in the finals. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 5/3/2009 9:55:00 PM

    Menka, my belated congrats in making the semi finals...Raul

  1. Date: 4/4/2009 10:18:00 PM

    Menka - Congratulations on having your poetry featured this week – God Bless, MJ

  1. Date: 4/1/2009 7:38:00 AM

    Congratulations Menka on your poem being featured this week on Poetry Soup. Vince

  1. Date: 3/30/2009 10:34:00 PM

    Very heartfelt write...Congratulations on being featured this week. Smiles from Lolita

  1. Date: 3/30/2009 5:37:00 PM

    Congratulations on your well deserved featured write of the week! Love, Shar

  1. Date: 3/30/2009 4:29:00 PM

    Interesting perspective on love in this poem. Congratulations on having it featured. Keep on writing. Wishing you ongoing success. Karen

  1. Date: 9/27/2008 7:55:00 PM

    Very beautiful and open poem - I sure do hope that it all works out - remember differences are nothing more than the building blocks that relationships stand upon provided that both people are willing to compromise with the other - Often we allow ourselves to overlook the answers because of our pride - best of wishes & God Bless

  1. Date: 9/25/2008 8:18:00 PM

    This was so touchy. Hope all goes well. Some very fine metaphors in between. Praying for you- Chitra

  1. Date: 9/25/2008 8:08:00 PM

    your poem touched me nice work