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Hidden Soul

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Hidden Soul

                                         







      

                                                 Hidden Soul

                               I am a forever more, so deep I stay. 
                               I'm imperishable, quiet at the heart of form.
                               I fear what is no more to be feared.
                               I'm unseen and can rise with the wind.
                               When my body is strip of my worn clothes
                               and pierce to the depths of the heart,
                               reality remains, I am a forever more.
                               I'm man's greatest wealth drench in blood
                               but can't be wet.
                                             I'm the hidden soul.
                                                          
                                                        By
                                                  Jay JOHNSON

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  1. Date: 3/24/2011 10:44:00 AM
    Quite meaningful, made me drift away for a minute, and has really made me melt on the inside. Its great, Jay.

  1. Date: 10/15/2008 9:13:00 PM
    Amazing! Nay my friend, I am not worthy to be your idol.. Instead I tell you now, I will be your number one fan!!! brgds. George

  1. Date: 10/6/2008 9:20:00 AM
    Beautiful tribute to what we all hope will remain "imperishable" ... smile ... thanks for this wonderful write, Jay and also your welcome comments on For The Birds.

  1. Date: 10/4/2008 4:55:00 PM
    Very well expressed Jay. We truly are so much more than we seem. We know and feel the hidden soul within us. This is a beautiful write. Love, Shar

  1. Date: 10/4/2008 8:59:00 AM
    to have a soul is to have a conscience it is the epitome of self, great write, take care D-nyce

  1. Date: 10/4/2008 8:16:00 AM
    Good Morning Jay, this is a marvelous personification of the soul, its strengths and weaknesses that are felt by man in form of spirit... Although it may be tread upon from time to time most assuredly its essence shall rise. I have enjoyed the emotions, imagery and flow of this read my friend :-) I thank you so very much for sharing such a fine write and for your lovely comments on my poetry. God's Love and Many Blessings, Always, Adell

  1. Date: 10/4/2008 2:11:00 AM
    I think Joseph pretty much said my feelings on this poem perfectly - the philosophy behind this poem is great - God Bless

  1. Date: 10/2/2008 8:20:00 PM
    This is a very interesting poem. I like how it flows and the essence of the piece. The soul is always capable of bouncing back in life. There is that hidden quality man is unable to see. I like the philosophy behind this poem. Great job! ~Joseph